My Friend’s Harem Is Obsessed With Me Chapter 18 Discussion

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Lame intro plot where people are somehow less than one-dimensional in their reactions to events. Painfully forced conversations between characters. Fight scenes are handwaved away with the author fading to black, jumping straight to the end of a slapstick pile of defeated foes that the MC is walking away from, or are full of cartoonish pseudo-violence like in a sentai show or B movie.

MC is portrayed as some kind of cringe 90's action movie hero with s*upid one-liners from both the MC and the author within a few sentences of each other for the gag.

Here's an excerpt:

Spoiler

“You two fit together nicely.”

Having landed on the ground, I held the heads of the two students in my hands and smashed them together, causing them to collapse.

That made quite a lump.

[collapse]

It's like an unironic Last Action Hero tribute or something.

TLDR: super cringe
 
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