After Being Marked by a Powerful Love Rival Chapter 1 part1 Discussion

If the chapter got some editing, it could easily be a 5 star.

The translation is done well and doesn't look like minimally-edited MTL. However the punctuation needs corrections, as there is on average a mistake in at least every third paragraph. Mostly there'll be a comma instead of a full stop, so what should be two sentences look like one sentence.

If you don't care about that then you'll like the story.

I loved the premise, but unfortunately I won't be reading more until a round of editing has been done.