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There's a way to make a character seem memorably attractive without forcing it in your reader's face 8 times in a 800 word chapter, and this author obviously has never mastered it. (I'm on the Pen Fairy arc and have only been reading it out of boredom every 10 days 🥱) [Ain't gonna fake though, Arc 2, and 4 were my favorite. ]Could it have been better without everybody soaking wet over the MC? YES. But you can't put much faith and expectation in books like these.Will I finish this? Probably not, and would I recommend it? No, unless you ask for a soft MC.