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The author just says they have 9 levels without any explanation about the differences of each level and the names of each level. The only difference noted is that each level is stronger than the lower level.
Other than that, there is no explanation at all.
[collapse]This story also has a lot of plot twists in it. There are big plot twists and there are also small plot twists in each arc.SpoilerLater there will be a plot twist that tells that the dreams of the heavenly sons and daughters of the hiddens, are not the future but parallel worlds.
Which I don't think that makes sense, because it contradicts with the original explanation that MC was sent by MC grandfather and ML to the past.
In addition, if indeed it is a parallel world, it means that there is no clarity on who the main character in the story, is because each world has its own MC and ML.
Other than that the concept of "MC and ML only replace another MC and ML who are in the parallel world" really bothers me.
Because it shows that MC doesn't change anything in his world. This happens because MC doesn't go back to the past but go to a parallel world, which means that all MC does is save the family of the MC who is in the parallel world, not the family of his own world.
which actually I think is quite ironic, lucky that it turns out that the ML from the original world merges with the one in the parallel world, otherwise it would be very sad.
[collapse]The weakness of this novel itself lies in the beginning of the story.SpoilerWhere at the beginning of the story the author makes many antagonists. Actually there is nothing wrong with this, but the way the author describes and brings out each character is too fast so that each character becomes easily forgotten.
Although later each character will be explained clearly without leaving any holes in the story. This still makes it difficult for readers to remember, it makes the readers need to look back at the previous chapter to remember the characters.[collapse]5 STAR.Note : Well I'm giving 5 stars not because the story is amazingly good, but because the author can maintain a stable plot for the story even after 600 chapters+++ which is rare to find.