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This story is incredibly well written and built upon a well defined world.As it is an reincarnation story, it is placed in the balancing act between pacing and exposition; but unlike many others which fails at this act. This story is very well paced meanwhile giving exposition in context and natural (mostly) Its premise is really good and it's characters are well written (most of them) it has total control of it's consistency and never exalts the main character for actions unnecessary of such praise.However there is one crippling flaw that is well hidden by the author: you will know how the story ends due to the occasional chapter segment that is in the perspective of the future. Which can kill the tension in the story at times, even though it is so well written. Which is disheartening because the story will become either boring or terribly bland knowing the MC will prevail.If you wish to enjoy this story to the upmost, never read the parts that will quite literally tell you the future of the rebellion and take your time when reading this to enjoy the detail in it.