Hakai no Miko Chapter 1 Discussion

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Currently, just after finishing translating the first chapter, I'm giving the story a rating of 4 Stars.

Overall, the story is a lot more refined and the writing is less than horrid from what I was expecting from an Isekai novel. I wouldn't compare it to, say Overlord, but it's definitely a decent read thus far, granted I was somewhat liberal in my translations to prevent the story sounding cancerous at some parts.

Spoiler

So, the first chapter starts out with the main character getting transported whilst in his home. Afterward, he appears in an underground temple to a quote-unquote "Evil God" worshipped by heretics. After the heretics are what I would consider carefully introduced by the author with a good amount of detail, the author then kills them off, basically pulling a bold move as if the story were Game of Thrones. From there, the rest of the chapter is kind of used to world build, leaving the reader confused as what came about the MC while everything went down around him.

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