I Was Reincarnated with OP Invincibility, so I’ll Beat ’em Up My Way as an Action-Adventurer Chapter v14 Discussion

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Tapping out on this one early. I usually try to get a fair number of chapters in before I give up, but this one is just bad.

The writing is just the most basic boring flavorless telling of events. We're still in the first event and so far we've met three characters other than MC, and the very first thing the MC talks about is that they have big breasts. They're otherwise barely described other than beautiful and with the most basic descriptors of what they're wearing and emphasizing again that they're attractive.

The first thing that happens is of course a once in a lifetime event where an almighty dragon attacks the city. This is a disaster. No, I'm not talking about the dragon attack, I'm talking about the narrative implications. And in an entire city, only two big-breasted adventurers are trying to fight it. And they're both not legendary S-Class, so they have no shot... because their ultimate attack that can kill a dragon for some reason, takes three minutes to charge... and apparently though they have time to seemingly calmly explain how dangerous the dragon is, point out that it can't use it's dragon breath repeatedly, and it's currently focused on the wall, they decide to forgo the impossible task of... not dying for three minutes, and decide to fight the dragon so others can run away.

So already, only 4 chapters in:

  1. A once in a lifetime would-be tragic event has occurred.
  2. This city that houses the kingdom's academy only has two adventurers around.
  3. These two B-Class adventurers can somehow kill this S-Class disaster ultimate monster city destoyer, if only someone could distract the big scary dragon for 3 minutes.
  4. Oh, conveniently, the MC just awakened invincibility. And as an added s*upid detail, his clothes are also invincible? A point the writer figured had to be known.
All of this is presented so matter-of-factly that I am already bored, and annoyed by how immediately inconsistent the world is just so MC can show off his new ability. The rules of the world were introduced in one sentence or two, only to immediately be broken and make no sense.
 
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