The Fox of France Chapter -- Discussion

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I liked the idea and the beginning. It played out very well. But I dropped it when

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MC got involved in scientific research.

It really came out of nowhere for me.

I don't remember whether they mentioned his background in his previous life but I find it hard to believe that some of the most acclaimed scientists of the era would believe a theory that didn't hv experimental basis. (They did check by themselves ofc) but the MC literally wrote an experiment from his past life and submitted it so quickly. Not to mention he wasn't involved in science at all before he submitted the paper.

Even the paper was submitted becuz of a bet with his brother.

If I were in their place I would wonder if he had stolen it.

Also him dealing with the scientists made me wonder how did his skills in maths come about since I had no clue.

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Other than that it's pretty good. The characters r generally well written if not complex. Keeps things interesting.
 
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I must say that Gresso in one in a billion. his character is to die for. he has this aura that you will love. and his past.... it's heart breaking but I am so proud of him that he survived all of that for his brother. his love for his brother.
 
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