I Become a Mafia in the Academy Chapter 10 Discussion

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Cool theme and lots of potential but killed by bad writting.

MC gets a power up by doing achievements that couldn't be any easier. Anything he does gives him a new skill that he needs at exactly the moment he needs. He is a reincarnated guy who trained for like 1 week and is already strong and has no problems because the achievements given him a skill to keep calm no matter the circumstances. It's very bizarre.

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He gets a item that can search any weapon in the world by making 5 people respect him or something, the system is ridiculous. And he chooses a item that is apparently super broken and just happened to be in a downtown shop in korea somehow and nobody knew about it. Then the first time he uses the weapon it instantly upgrades because he made 10 people fear the weapon.

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This could've been a really good novel without the system or with a better one but for me it's just a 3/5 because of it. Still readable if you like the Mafia theme and the references but I wouldn't recommend it.
 
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