- #1
It's kinda awful. I really want to like it, but the writing is so generic that it's painful to read.The story wears a "mafia" paint job, but there's nothing ever threatening or menacing about any of them. They aren't even doing anything illegal and are pretty much okayed by the government to rule over part of the country.There are never any stakes in the story. All of the characters are bland. The combat it dreadfully uninteresting. (Very, very minor spoiler) Spoiler
Most of the time, combat starts, and then ends immediately because the MC pulls out a gun.
[collapse]It's not lower because it is still pretty average for this sight, but they seriously wasted an interesting premise: a post-apocalyptic fantasy Mafia story on earth.And one more thing to complain about.SpoilerWhat do you think someone who is hiding (poorly, I might add) that they are a mafioso would call a club they establish as a base of operations inside a school? Freaking "Famila". What kind of 0 IQ dumbass people teach at and attend this academy? Also, I wonder if the student that has the nickname "boss" and lugs around a Tommy gun has any connection to the Mafia? That couldn't possibly be true.
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