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Very good novel and translation, tough it's a shame that the translator's website doesn't seem to have a way to comment.If you read until the curtent transslated chapter and still like the novel, keep reading, it only gets better. EDIT: Suggestions for the translator (RAW Spoilers) Spoiler
Change the term "Demon" in Great Demon to Devil, and change Great Demon to Archdevil, since unlike a Demon and Demon Lord which comes from the Spirit evolution line (Elf/Dwarf evolution) Angels and Devils come from the Homunculus evolution line.
Also, when the time that [REDACTED] evolves into the human's evolution disaster, instead of calling the evolution "Evil Human" and "Good Human" I propose calling them Sin/Virtue of Humanity, because it sounds more like a race than an adjetive.
For the Vampiric disaster evolution, instead of "True Vampire" I suggest using the "Vampire Progenitor" term.
Lastly, for the Beastman disaster evolution, instead of "Spirit Beastman", use "Sacred Beastman"
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