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Story is pretty interesting for the first 30ish chapters. After that the MC unlocks a 'System' which practically brainwashes him into becoming a guy who can only think with his d.So a complete personality swap occurs. And know that this is a merger of the old bodie's personality that has subsumed the MCs original one... Yet it was never hinted to for over a year that he has been in this world. However, this process occurs with in 4 chapters?!!!A rapid, a complete overhaul of his ego is a shocker since it has remained consistent for 30chps beforehand. But with this abrupt change, comes with the genre splitting off into something else completely.Like sure I know this is a hentai fic, but when we go from a cunning MC to one who can't even go half a day without commiting a pe*verted action, the plot literally suffers grievously. Now there is too much smut for this to function as a legitimate story.If I want to read a pure smut fic, there are better options than this.So am I suppose to read 20k words and expect the story to progress one inch at a time? Or should I expect the smut to become the sole focus now?There is only so many R scenes I could take...Adding onto this, our MC is now a total deviant. A willing mascho who licks girls clean as they ab*se him... No longer does he hate it as before. Instead he embraces it fully as he sinks further into the quagmire of lust. Yet the inconsistency doesn't really end here as there is an S in his heart which will overcome him at times, where he can freely break away from his indentured servitude for a moment and partake upon the fine ladies 'assets' without any sort of consequence it should've entailed.So yeah.For a whole year he is fine with playing the long game, but the moment this 'System' came he throws caution to the wind and starts to build his harem at breakneck speeds. The sole trait which he prided himself over, self control, has been abolished to make way for his desires as he finds out there are no such things as consequences to his actions. While the high IQ he once proclaimed to have, had left alongside the original personality which was devoured and replaced.I came here for the plot and the 'Plot', not for the illogical smut which took over. Our MC was once a shining example of self insert, but now he has been mind broken by his racial and ancestral traits where I can't even recognise his original self. Nothing remains of the protagonist, instead all that is left is a husk of his former self.And since I'm not into the new kink dynamic that has been brought on from this change, I couldn't push further on. The sudden abruptness is too much for me and has killed the fic for me.Rate 3.4/5