- #1
??? Am I missing something, but writing not good at all? There is a lot of random events with random solutions and only then given explanation why this solution works, or why this event is happening. For example, boss randomly attacks MC, MC randomly buys a item that helps, and then we given explanation why item works. Was it hard to write a setup and payoff? I am not gonna be surprised if next moment aliens show up, because with book logic anything can be explained afterwards. And there is not enough exposition or explanations, that why author can write any random thing, because nothng was established.My second problem - plot holes. MC was in bad health condition and can't even walk himself, but if he dies monsers will be strengthened, why his teammates didn't give him medicine from the start? Like his "holy father" teammate was OK to give him a high lvl weapon for his ptotection, but gave him medicine only after he was even more injured. (but after taken it, MC can walk, so what was the point not to give it from the start???) Was medecine rare or cost a lot? he cannot improve his health? Not enough information again.And third point - author more focused how beautiful MC is, from 15 chapters I know how thin his waist, how white his skin, how red his lips, how sexy he is when weak... but not much about his character? It feels very superfitial. I don't get why it has high rating, not my thing, I guess.