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It's not the worst or best story of this type that I've ever read. It's just not my type of reading, but I read it to pass the time. I stopped after a few worlds.Personally, I didn't like MC very much, who always gets what he wants. Tedious, sometimes like a puppet.It seems that he respects ML's decisions and that they have a healthy relationship, but he manipulates her feelings (ML's) from the first encounters, knowing her weaknesses and desires in each world.I remember that MC thinks that she would let ML go if he continued to be in love with someone else, but obviously that would happen, with someone else giving her everything she ever wanted and adapting to her tastes.In fact, it would be fun to find a story in which ML could resist this kind of manipulation.I don't like your justification for getting involved with the targets, because they're cute too. At the beginning of the story, it seems like MC had never been in a relationship, so it's strange that he looked at ML and decided he wanted to start his romantic life because he was handsome. I'm not the kind of reader who needs a deep reason for a couple to get together in a story. And the sooner, the better for me, actually. But seriously, MC likes ML just because he's handsome? I mean, seriously, wasn't there anyone more handsome in all the other worlds he's been to?The good thing is that he stays by ML's side even at the end of the missions.