- #1
It has great potential to be a pretty gripping story. There is alot of misunderstandings going around and the mc's both have tragic histories. In short I love the story for the potential drama (tearjerkers) Sadly the translation quality sucks. Hel scans despite crediting a translator and proofreader, on this particular novel (I have read the tl of another novel under them and that was great) fails so hard. On one chapter in particular where a character talks about being saved by the titular character it was several sentences of "you saved me" when it was clearly should've been "That person/He saved me" I'm assuming this has just been directly mtl'd and not read through before posting because the terminologies, descriptors, pronouns are all over the place and reading and trying to decipher the story is pretty jarring for the immersion. I do hope it will improve more in later chapters. Because this really should be higher up in the rankings.