- #1
The plot is interesting, but the pacing feels incredibly slow despite the action. The author will take a full chapter for a conversation and do in-depth analysis of each and every word picked, which can be interesting, but it's to the point that it's excessive (in my opinion - seems like other reviewers enjoy it tho).Unfortunately the translation quality is not very good.
- Pronouns are made up: someone is consistently referred to as both "grandmother" and "the old man". Still not sure what gender they actually are.
- Sentence objects are also made up: "Did I strangle you" and "did I strangle myself" are two VERY different things.
- One chapter has a character repeatedly referred to by another character's name for some reason.