Crossing to the Primitive Chapter -- Discussion

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The ending made me quite dissapointed because it was fast paced. Like the author just end it like that. The story has lot of lack information. I mean there are lot of info there that is not explained properly. Also, I didn't see in in the story if the MC manage to extend his life or what. The side CPs are portrayed so blandly and the MC is so normal.

It was good at the start until it gets boring as if the author didn't even took the story seriously and just dump some plots there in here.

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I am so dissapointed to the ML though at the reason of their quarrel. I mean MC refuses to do it every day and ML ignore the MC because of that I mean wtf? Whatever, he later apologize cuz MC intentionally made himself sick so ML will talk to him again. What do I expect to a primitive man and a so very normal person with no even sense of dignity. It felt like author was looking for ways to make them fight to make the story less bland but it only made me roll my eyes instead.

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All in all it was good and clinche.
 
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