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So the story is kind of interesting. But there are some part that make it a little boring or annoying. Like how easily the character (or the author) to do something "just think about it later/ it's tomorrow problem" when it's pretty important topic/problem. And how the MC the type to "nah I don't really want to think about it. Can we just use our fist?" and the ML the type to hide anything that he thinks it will trouble the MC. Can you all just discuss thing proprerly? Romance development between them is actually pretty good. But sometimes MC needs to stay his ground in front of the ML.