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Theres nothing to like both MC & ML.
Things I don't like :
1. MC hate ML hide his identity, he said its a lie, while he also hide his identity from ml?
2. ML love doesn't seems real (superficial), he want to treat MC better because MC give him and his family technology, which means more money and power.
3. MC keep talking about doesn't want to be bottom or get pregnant, ML want him to (kinda force him). Im saying this from a woman pov, having babies need 2 way communication, a new life created from 2 people love each other, but of course if you not ready yet, then you tell your partner to pls understand and wait until you're ready. They way MC decide to be bottom and have baby are forced by ML to me, and MC even talk bad about having em or being bottom. Im uncomfortable. Having a baby is supposed to be a happy topic between couple, not to be forced on.
4. S*x, lol. Their first night is MC kinda force by ml. Crazy how ppl or characters in the novel think this is funny? That thing supposed to be 2 people enjoy it, not 1 sided. Its not hot or funny whatsoever. I hate when that happens, where the author love to write the receiver need to endure pain and having weak legs can't get up the next day (like run by a truck) scenario. Well no, not romantic. And no consent. S*x is supposed to be both side looking forward to and enjoying it, not just the ml, while the MC hate it and feel repulsive.
[collapse]I like the plot, but I don't like the MC & ML.