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So far so good. It became a bit drag-on at some point, but it's quite good. The relationship between the two MCs, while can be simple, is extremely complicated, however, I'm deeply assured that they will be together. They already had the foundation of 30 years of marriage and working together, no one knew the other like themselves.This kind of relationship can be toxic, especially the start, and it was toxic, look at their past lives. But I believe they can make it work in this life and not by sheer luck either.The thing I have to complain about, while the author is amazing at conveying her MCs' feelings, the author can be really long-winded. My God, it's really long-winded. There are some parts that's just redundant and my eyes automatically skim over it because what should be conveyed has been conveyed. It creates this awkwardness in the text and might bury the real beautiful message the author actually wants to convey. At first it was okay, but the author got worse in her winded speech the more the story progress.I can positively say the author got too much to say, Idk if it's to reach the word count, but either ways it's quite terrible.