Watch You Turn Naughty Chapter Completed Discussion

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It could be better. It has a lot of possible plots but it steered away from dog bloods and unnecessary heartaches. Thus, I find the story to be bland. Well, it's nice that there is no heartaches but it decreases the plot value.

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The story was fast paced. It didn't divulge much about the feelings of both ML and FL esp during their split. The ML just suddenly realized that the FL is the president of an airline company. So he decided not to tell his feelings for her when he left to study aboard. This led FL to be heartbroken. But there is no time for sadness because she found out that she is pregnant. All that time she is waiting for the ML to come back. When the ML finally came back, he was able to get her back immediately without any problems. So I was like, well... Okay. She really likes him anyways. There is no point on pretending. She showed her son and he immediately accepted and apologized to the girl. That's why for me it was bland. It was like "meh. Okay. That's it. I knew this would happen already."

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The ML and FL are both strong characters though the ML started poor in the story. Very predictable plot. No forced s3x. No main villains or antagonist. Overall, it's okay.
 
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