- #1
Thirteen chapters in and we barely have a hint of personality from the FL and ML and we're just starting a plot arc as of c13.Translation-wise: the formatting makes it difficult to discern when the FL is partaking of inner dialogue and actually speaking.Writing-wise: everything feels juvenile and wattpad-ish. I need more brain stimulation and have no high hopes for this one. Just not my cup of tea. 🤷🏻♀️