The Legitimate Daughter Doesn’t Care! Chapter 89 Discussion

Wow, I knew there would be retribution, but to think it would be so spectacular. I couldn't wait for the translators, so I ended up binge-reading the MLT Chinese version.

Writing: 7/10

The writing style is simple with an average word flow. There are quite a few awkward places where it feels like the tone shift is too sudden without any reason or rhyme. It's not too bad and could probably be refined through a simple pass from a professional editor.

Story: 9/10

The story provides a rather unique twist that really helps glue together the plot. The way that the two leads interact and grow to where they end up really shows in the story and feels logical once you stop to think that they had shared their experiences since childhood and grew up taking their bodies for granted until they finally met. Story direction is fairly predictable for the most part with nice twists thrown in that feel logical in regards to the characters involved. While some characters don't develop and are fairly two dimensional the characters who do show growth are done so in subtle and amazing ways most of the time.

Translation: 9/10

I feel that the translators had done a very good job on the chapters that they had done. Not much else to say on this point.

Overall, a very good read. You end up feeling for characters that you didn't expect to. There are some issues with the way things are executed, but most of the poorly executed plot points are overshadowed by superior character development for certain charcters.