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Wretchedd (who's now changed their name to Happyengineer42) seems to have read maybe 5 and a half chapters before giving it a review and it wasn't even a proper one. I'm going to take this chance to break down their points because not only are they s*upid as they're only looking at the surface of the story, but are also ignoring entire paragraphs of exposition in favor of making the story look bad.First, while it's true that the main character does pull a Robin Hood and steal from the rich to give to the poor, he clearly states his reasoning for doing so multiple times. It gives him more publicity, which is clearly incredibly important if he wants to get his point across when he later steals important documents and information and needs to actually spread it, which he does, by the way, and clearly expressed his intention to do so from the start.Next, the paintings and jewelry, as you oh so conveniently neglected to mention, wereSpoiler
once in a lifetime memento's of a corrupt business owners deceased wife
[collapse], and struck a far bigger blow to the conglomerate mentally than simply stealing documents, which were behind a locked, guarded, inaccessible safe since you forgot to mention that.As for the FL... did you even read? Like a single chapter? It was clearly elaborated on why she was 1) able to recognize him, 2) that it was intentional on his end and 3) why she's so naive about how to catch him. Let me break this down since apparently the name Wretchedd means wretched reading compression.For the FL recognizing the protagonist, it was clearly stated and shown multiple times that anyone above a certain rank, that rank being A, the FL's, are capable of seeing through facial derecognition technology. Something the protagonist deliberately took advantage of to mess with the FL.For her acting immature, that's elaborated on multiple times as well in the form of the "original story." The FL has black and white views due to years of Spoilerliteral brainwashing
[collapse] which causes her to be only be able to pursue villains in a straightforward way. Plans she makes won't go well due to her inhibited ability to literally think for herself. This is literally the MAIN f*ckING PLOT of the story, and what the Main Character is actively trying to rectify within the story. How you somehow missed this despite it being talked about for multiple chapters straight genuinely blows my damn mind.Finally, her not looking into his background... wait, what background? This is a isekai you, as it was put in your review, complete dunce!!! The main character has no background to look into. He literally appeared one day in the world and has been moving from there. As for his movements, one of his abilities is literally Spoilermanifesting clones
[collapse] and it explains why he wasn't caught being a villain!!!Why, in your review of the story, did you seem to forget literally all of this?!? Again, did you even read??! It's really ridiculous that not a single one of these points was mentioned. All of this information was said at least twice in the early chapters of the story, yet you decided to neglect it for your own narrative, which is ridiculous. Be better.