System Supplier Chapter 12 Discussion

Promising premise, poor execution.

I will confess I didn't make it very far in, so I don't know if it improves. I didn't really have the patience.

I was looking forward to a system story where the main character makes systems and acts like a powerful grandpa. Instead I got a garbled story that rushes through things and lacks logic.

There seems to be no discernible reason for who he picks to give a system and the system mechanics were poorly explained. Lots of random people pop in with little introduction of who they are and I was irritated when, while in a modern world, many people quickly accepted the supernatural without much surprise or skepticism.

Disappointing.