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A BIG HARD 1 STAR OF CHEAP WRITING-FL's smooth brain was hard for me to comprehend. I don't know how the author manage to write a character like this: She does absolutely nothing, the only thing she does is using the people around her. She doesn't do the work, doesn't think for herself, she's supposedly this long-lived-mid-level demon but acts like a pre-teen child who knows nothing about the world she's living in.-The 1st ML is just too convenient for her. He acts like a soulless servant, does everything for her. It doesn't even make tiny miny sense why he's too soft on this shallow being. He is just randomly affectionate.-About the world-building... It's a sloppy mess so I don't even want to complain about it now.-Tried to give it a chance until chapter 10. Don't think it'll be worth continuing. Dropped.