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The concept of the story is interesting to kill time but overall I don't think the author handles it well, plot jumps around a bit, he forgets about the tasks he assigns, he forgets goals he gave the character, the power ranking system is very bunched together and at times doesn't follow whats already been saidsometimes there's decent development with female characters but a lot of the time it follows a pattern of she's introduced -> 2 chapters later we're told she has funny feelings for the MC -> he goes to help her once -> she's hopelessly in love with hima lot of things don't seem well thought out and honestly after looking ahead a bit it seems like the story is moving forward at an absolute snails pace and the story is nowhere near complete