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I think I was tricked.I read a review saying how we should read this novel before reading the other reviews. I ended up reading 150 chapters, and I was totally disappointed. The idea isn't bad but in my opinion, the author doesn't know what he wants to do with this novel. The MC received dozens of quests, with quite a high difficulty, and a deadline... I mean, the MC seems sometimes to forget about what he has to do, and the penalties are extremely harsh. Instead of being given those quests little by little, they were given every time the author could do it.As I said, the idea is amazing, to have a typical "arrogant MC" who likes to sleep around as the protagonist of this story, but the author doesn't know how to take advantage of it.Spoiler
There are other problems.
- the MC is supposed to be "heartless", and yet he is known to sleep with women once and never see them again. Then why does he care about Bei Bei's purity, but not about her well being at all? It's like the systems, forces him to care about her, and once the quest is finished, the MC nearly forgets about her.
- The author didn't write a single s*x scene or a small sentence saying how he banged someone. Isn't he a hedonist?
- The MC isn't likeable sometimes, and pretty heartless. His teacher has a trauma about his killing, if I'm not wrong he knew about it, and yet he forgot... Oh well, whatever.
- Again, why did the author give within 50 chapters, enough quest for the next few hundred chapters? (not including events, quests with a 24h deadline)
- The author doesn't seek a harem for the MC, and yet he is in touch with so many women... He even seems to want to stay single!
- The MC is supposed to become a better person through the system, and yet it seems that after accomplishing a quest, he forgets about the woman who was linked to it.