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there was even this partnin the early chapters of the novel where MC killed the 3rd grandson or something of this liang something family in the streets in the middle of the night. After killing the man, he used his fire spitting pig to burn the corpse into ashes and leaves confidently thinking that no one saw, but it just so happens that one of his classmates and also one of the city's 4 young masters saw all this and even got a video out of it so after the MC left, he emerged from the shadows. But how come it did not mention there if him also witnessing the pig spit fire? This young master was also supossedly got ti record it all so it should also be understandable if he were to witness all those magic! I mean damn author!... Oh one more thing, there was a conflict between the MC and the Hao family (one of the 4 major family in the city), this young master who recorded the event where MC killed a young master from the liang family, was supposed to send the video to the liang family anonymously, but changed his mind and chose to pospone it since the MC and Hao family were at war, like what the f*ck? Is the author s*upid or hes just acting? This young master with the video was supposed to be an enemy of the MC so, isnt the conflict between the MC and the hao family supposed to be the best time to send the video and add more problem to the MC? I could not help bet get angry at thi s*upidity, I dont know wether I should direct my frustration to the MC or the author itself, even a middle school child would be able to know such oppurtunity. its not like this young master with the evidence had some kind of a grand plan for the later chapters, mind you that he was gonna send the video anonymously so it was purely to cause trouble to the MC, so the conflict was the best timing. But no, the author made all the characters s*upid.
[collapse]5. So the world revolves around the MC right? Even then, there should be a balance with the appearance of the MC's foes and MC's allies. But almost all chaps contains MC encountering enemies. There should also be a balance to how MC interracts with the female characters but author keeps on introducing 1, creating conflict and misunderstanding between the MC and thr female characters then introducing another one while shelving the others, like what the f*ck! It was so frustrating that I cursed the author.6. I trully think that the author is trying too hard.All in all, its pretty bad. Its worst than how I wrote my review of this novel.Dont wast time on this. Sorry to the author no hurt feelings.