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Ok maybe it's bc I'm reading the mtl, but my God stop with the constant cat metaphors for MC. It's like am I reading about a person or cat who got divorced like please.I'm sad because I suspect this good premise is being mediocrely done bc the writing soooooo tell vs. Show. It's ok to have a exposition for a whole chapter if it actually illuminates something new. But using it as a device to constantly give cat metaphors or etc to explain the MC's or ML's behavior/feelings is lazy writing. I feel like I'm being talked down to like I'm dumb. Just show me and I would love your story omg. Just show me insttteeeaaadddd I beg u.It's not so bad but it's a real shame - maybe that's why it bothers me more. This has a super interesting premise to an otherwise basic entertainment bl genre.Fine I'll be honest, I'm being picky bc I ship him with his agent ;-;Spoiler
Ok wild idea, but don't you think the MC's attachment to the idea of the ML is only due to 2 years of stockholm syndrome? It probably changes later anyway but no wonder the pursual is so hard to digest in the beginning.
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