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The story is good and I like the idea of author, MCs identity. However, there are some lines and scenes that are overly dramatic and/or out of place.The instance itself is quite good but the ML's development and personality is out of place. Also, I'm very disappointed with ML. For the MC, I'm wondering why they didn't save the npc who had gained consciousness that the world was only a game (polive investigator and doctor). Spoiler
you can't trust anyone not even yourself, you can only trust me. It is honestly a bullshit. I hate the MLs arrogant line. He should let the MC grow. He let MC grew in some ways. Also, another line that pisses me off "your hand is destined to be stained with blood... let me be the first soul under your death. His idea of protecting is misaligned. It seems that the author just wanted to put a dramatic lines that are out of place and Support it.
https://m. danmei. la/book/18091/2646772. htML
[collapse]There is also an arc which is very similar to "the purge" movie