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It's fine? The idea is very fun and the dynamic of the FL and ML are enjoyable, however one thing bugs me a lot. Even though I really like Gemma's personality, there hasn't been anything substantial to prove her ability. Yes, off screen she's a super famous thief, but on screen she just feels mostly like a bumbling idiot. I think she deserves more care than currently. From the first few chapters to now she never gets a W. I guess what I want to say is that I love the character, but I was hugely disappointed seeing the typical 'ML walks up, FL tamed, ret*rded and submissive from now on' switch being flipped. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next.