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This novel is a very cliche niave young master type of story, which I'm usually okay with. Sometimes after reading a bunch of crap trying to be edgy I find comfort in the cliche. This was just too badly written.The writing is juvenile, the story illogical and the MC too niave. It read like a bad novel inside of a transmigration/rebirth novel. You know one of those ones where the transmigrator is explaining the previous novel and we as the reader ask "why would an author really write such idiocracy?" Well I found said author.The MC is too naive for my liking, but ultimately not bad. The ML is the cliche cold CEO. Not much to him. The family acts completely illogical. The og ML is okay and the og MC got the absolute short end of the stick.The whole time I couldn't help but think this story could have been so much better if the og MC stayed in it. Could have been a completely fluffy uplifting slice of life story, but no. The author used a transmigrator to turn og MC into a clown. Even if the transmigrator had a little bit of brain cells this story could have at least been mediocre.The backstory of MCs birth could have added some excitement into the story, but it gets explained quickly and was anticlimactic. The family's way of handling it was kind of a let down.The romance is sizing up to be the annoying type so I don't want to wait around for it either. Will drop this here and probably not read again.The translation is fine, no notes though so some parts/puns get lost in translation.