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Definitely had potential, but wasted a lot of opportunities. The pacing is really terrible that I was forced to give up. Just from the start a whole lot of characters are introduced which some of them might not even be important yet but still introduced, I am fine with that but the naming sense is terrible in my opinion, a lot of characters have a very unique name (hard to pronounce) and keeping up with them is a terrible chore, not to mention the small time skips of weeks to months to a semester. Spoiler
MC entered academy early on around ch4, but as of ch16 MC already had the winter break & preparing for the final exam of 1st year. Nothing important happened in the academy another wasted material
[collapse] MC remembers past life at the age of three but after that it immediately had a 10 year time skip which is another wasted material for a novel in my opinion.There are hints of people trying to get into a romantic relationship with MC but author better not go through with that. One male lead candidate is already a graduate of the academy so maybe around 18 but remember our MC is only 13 years old, though the difference may not be much but for gods sake she's 13 bro, it smells of a crime. This novel would be better with really no hints of romance.Every chapter is poorly structured that its giving me the headache just to understand the story and the names are also not helping. Author assumes too much and not much world building is happening, like what the hell is Depth 4, how strong should people be to get there, or would there really be anyone going there at all like a forbidden zone.