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So firtst thing that needs to be adressed is, that this story is clearly AI/MT (machine translated) withouth any quality control, making the story unreadable at times, because there is zero consistensy on who's who. One time her female childhood friend is adressed "her" another time its "he", every character, and even nobility ranks differ per chapter, so be warned of that.-Story itself is perfect example of having story with a great potencial and how to completly waste it away. Other reviewers already stated the story issues better then I can, but in short the most interesting things are skipped over, (Her adaptation to the world, her growth, how she got strong, what is world like, etc) so there is little to no world building, and what little it has the story will poorly explaint it, fully expecting reader to know what author was thinking when they wrote it.As example: "There is magic in this world and we are told, that MC is born with large mana." That's cool, but what does it means beyond the obvious? What is the magic system in this story? How strong is she in terms of other people? What can she do with it? We are never told.The story makes it centerpoint of her character, but uses it only as plot device, so that author can slap "she can do this, she can do that now, it wasn't just never mentioned it before!" Author keeps slaping things MC can do based on what story currently needs her to do withouth explaining anything. We are always only told, that MC simply used her modern knowelidge and magical engineers made it for her. How does magic or magical technology works? We dont know!-MC is honesty underdeveloped and underused. In the 22 chapters that I read, she doesnt go throught any character developments. She doesnt face any long term problems, rivals, or enemies. The whole "issue" with her family is basicaly defused right in the first 6 chapters, that you even forged she has any issues with them at all, Althought story tries to make it as "looming issue down in the future", it completly forgets about it just as fast as it was defused and every time story reminds you of it, it's mostly comical relieve, that I can't take seriously. She lacks enemies, rivals or any strugle beyond "Being forced to attend academy, so she can't farm monsters and family might lecture her..." Spoiler
Because her family keeps solving her problems for her, and on rare ocasions they dont, she will have handy magic/magitech she just conviniently had/knew, so that everything gets solved within same chapter, two at max anyway.
[collapse]-Characters are very shallow, they exist there usualy only for a plot reasons. MC's family is only one somewhat developed, but still shallow, because their reason seem to be only to make excuse for being send to frontier, and make her life easy and bail her out when she needs it. Her natural anatagonist of half-sister beyond being completly cartoonish, seems to exist only to sometimes appear to say something dumb to make "trouble" that turns into nothing with few lines of dialogue from MC, and the rest of characters to fill the void, be it same year classmates who gets forgoten and never seen again faster then I can read their names, anatagonists so they can dissapear forever by the next chapter, Royal family to give illusion, that world isnt revolving around MC and that there is some political intrigue going on, or sometimes drop in as characters MC knows to fill the empty chapters with some dialogue.To summary, the whole story feels more like some random episodes then fully coherent story. The whole world MC's in is hardly ever explained, and everything interestin in fantasy settings is basicaly put into "you should know what author was thinking". There isnt any issue/goal MC has to overcome or achieve, enemies to face or defeat, or anything going at all. MC is simply there, commenting/reacting to what's happening and thats the whole "story" here. All 22 chapters that I read (covering roughly a year) you could have given me in summary and I wouldnt miss on anything, how empty and bland this is.