I Was Kicked Out of My House, but I’m Living Well Now ~ A Comfortable and Convenient Second Life With Cheat-Like Magic and Previous Life Knowledge! Chapter 14 Discussion

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fast paced and cluttered of ideas. It was quite clear the writer did not have a good draft plot beforehand. Unfortunate. But giving them more time and experience, they could crafted a unique and refreshing story in the future.
 
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