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Unfortunately, the author threw it.Initially I was going to rate this as a 4/5, but the author seemed to lose their marbles half way through. Felt like I was watching a marvel film where they create things in the world to supplement the characters. It's supposed to be the other way around; when your cringe characters are just that, your writing won't become much else.Amazing storylines become cringe fascinations of a teenager when you suddenly introduce Spoiler
overpowered tower, MC knows every spell in the game, MC made the game! He knows everything MC is cool! MC is cool! MC cool! ML is crazy!? ML is dark wow, omg ML kills for fun, oh wow he's so deep, oh my god what beautifully deep literary writing
[collapse]The writing is dogsh*t and I think the only thing keeping this above 1 star is the fact that sometimes the MC and ML act like normal adventurers as opposed to a pair of Mary's doing whatever they want because they can 'b-b-but they have a goal!' once you read far enough you'll realise any goals the authors hints to, or any goals the MC claims to have, are just temporary assertions made to fill either a potential or a past plot hole.Another reason why I have this at more than one star is because sometimes, the author alludes to a deeper lore and premise, though they seem to have dementia and forget it as soon as it's no longer necessary. I can tell the author had a lot of fun writing this. I will be finishing this novel, simply because I want to read smut between the main two characters, but I wouldn't expect any readers to find gold here. I've tasted the poison! It's definitely poison. This sort of dog sh*t quality is expected after reading 500-700+ chapters of a web novel, not within the first 60 chapters of a short story. Short stories are short because instead of quantity, we are given quality, in this novel we were given neither. I honestly despise this caricature of writing and I hope it dies off like the authors career will. It contains no quality and simply hopes to draw you in with having amazing initial chapters, but later having the most unscrupulously dogshit, utter garbage, complete waste of electricity-chapters that you question whether the author dropped dead, like did they seriously have an ai come up with the rest of the story after chapter 30? Read, read, read. I recommend you read this, just you so you realise I'm not bullshitting you, i've never seen a novel fall of this hard and I seriously doubt the mental stability of any of the reviewers below me.