Full Server First Kill Chapter -- Discussion

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I personally have read all of Nian Zhong's works, and you could say this work is the simplest in plot... I mean, it doesnt mean that this story is not good, it's just that there are too many important minor characters which missing without explanation at the end of the story.

Yeah I know they say that players who don't know the whole truth about Paradise will have their memories erased... It's just that this explanation is too simple and a bit inconsistent with Nian Zhong's style.

The lack of explanation at the end of characters such as Hot Ash, Abandon, Bly and several other important minor players who don't know about Paradise as a whole can probably be forgiven.

But what about characters like Anakin, Solo and Dorothy??? Anakin and Solo have been on Paradise's side from the start of the story, and not having a pov in the ending at all is really disappointing... and even though Dorothy doesn't know everything about Paradise, in the end she still guesses everything and can be said as the most prominent character from Player's side.

Even Lynn, who is a major supporting character, only gets small inserts at the end, along with Painter, Drake and his goddess.

The other things that good in this story is the fact that Nian Zhong still remains consistent in writing characters in his stories.

And when I said "It's good", it's mean that not all male character must be gay, and not all female characters must be tr*sh or scum... all the characters are written with life, and that was the reason why Nian Zhong story will always be imprinted in memory.
 
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