- #1
(Actually competed with terrible mtl) - the MC is really cool, and never becomes an idiot (so nice !) - he’s also far from perfect which makes him a bit more than 2D.- the same cannot be said for the ML whose somewhat vague description that could be a succession of stereotypes (the cold inexpressive, the rather mean and rotten avenger, the hot lover, the mild and indulgent « perfect » boyfriend...) - it’s so obvious that characters with no emotions are unrelatable I really wonder how these are still so over used- the plot is interesting ! It takes times to unravel, even if its resolution is rather simplistic (too fast ?) - I like that it touches a few concept like freedom of the characters of a plot or real life, or even transhumanism (very light) - I like the thin threshold between what is a story and what is not that keep appearing to deepen the story - and lastly it manages to tie quite a few strange things together into an ok threadso why 4 ? Well, there’s a little bunch of nice side characters, but most of their development is internet exchanges, and it can go on and on for so long that you forget the story - honestly that is really too much « noise « - it add length, sometimes it’s fun, but mostly it’s too much, even more when you can scroll dozens of strangers comments in a raw : that is a serious interruption at timei think (against web novel flaw) it would be super good with a trim, and maybe something like 15/20 % less content to have more dynamic