Moto Sekai Ichi’i no Sub-chara Ikusei Nikki Chapter 42 Discussion

  • #1
Well it was fun at first but then it turn very typical of japanese isekai novel where MC keep complaining how annoying a girl was but did nothing to change it and in the end the girl will be part of the group. And they still being annoying to the end.
 
  • #2
Ignore the negative.  This is the life story of and Gracie.  It's not pretty. But Hayden is a bad boy.  I wanted Gracie to be stronger,  but i understand her. The more negative the comments, shows the strength of your writing.  if it causes no offense, then it is not good.
 
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