- #1
It needed to not have the train passing by or, better yet, have the character repeat the line after that.I have no real issues with the protagonist or female leads aside from the cliches being forced on them making them act slightly out of character so the author can make it a cliche harem rom com novel where the protagonist will choose the main heroine anyway despite her being the worst option of the female leads because cliche. It's not what happens that bothers me even, it's how it happens.Anyway, two star is for lack of ambition and nothing to set it apart from any other harem romcom.