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Chapter 1 and 2 might be unbearable to some because the protagonist is like those anon who rage rant when their waifu betrayed their expectations (like that infamous hololive one). But trust me, it's worth the buildup because the protagonist's monologue and dialogue on how she comes to terms with her situation are quite amusing and realistic.
The pacing felt just right. There's always tension and anticipation in the story. The character felt real, having their own background and thoughts. World building is slowly revealed, not info dump. The plot is great, it felt creative and dynamic.
My only critique is that the writing wasn't fluid, the structure and rhythm could be improved. (TL is decent, but this is more like the original problem)
[collapse]SUMMARY SpoilerLee Ji-hwan a 26yo college student, awakens his memories in the body of a debt maid named Lilith. Lilith is Lee Ji-hwan most hated character from his fav adult game because Lilith is a pushover who easily caves in to the fat pig Ethan's s*xual ab*se, thus leaving no way for player to keep her purity. Fortunately, Lilith hasn't been "trained" by Ethan yet. But she's a mere debt maid, how can she resist the noble authority? What means can she use to escape Ethan's c*otch?
[collapse]My novel updates rating scale:Spoiler5 ⭐ Very enjoyable, with some minor issues that can be ignored.
4 ⭐ Enjoyable, with some issues that can't be ignored but won't ruin the enjoyment.
3 ⭐ Mildly enjoyable, with some major issues that may ruin the enjoyment
2 ⭐ Slightly enjoyable, with many major issues that will definitely ruin the enjoyment.
1 ⭐ Not enjoyable, don't read this novel. Not worth your time. Not recommend
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