The Deer Falls Into The Tiger’s Den Chapter 1 Discussion

  • #1
This is really, really cute. I loved the small twist at the end. Their relationship is so sweet. I love their nicknames for each other too and how dominating ML is but also how MC doesn't always take it either. The only thing I didn't like was thatSpoiler

their first time together was basically r*pe. I know ML was drugged but going in without lubrication or prep 😫😬 it was MC's first time and he was so disappointed that's how it was. I was hoping there would be make up s*x to make me feel better and there was but author didn't describe it so that was bumming. They had so much s*xual tension so that was disappointing. MC knew it wasn't ML's fault because he was drugged but still ugh.

[collapse] But the rest of it was great.
 
  • #2
I really want to like this book, I do, the idea of the story is great but the errors are so horrendous. In it's current state not something I want to pay to continue reading. this book is in desperate need of an editor.
 
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