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This novel isn't terrible, but it is full of holes. The way the relationship develops makes little to no sense. Everything is just kind of spit-shined with our MC saying, "She's so attractive" and "I can't help but give in." But even that I can usually tolerate to a certain point. I don't have that high of requirements for believability when it comes to yuri fluff. What really killed me was one thing:Spoiler
When she finds out she's 20-something days pregnant and considering an abortion, she's asks if the fetus will feel pain. ACCORDING TO THIS BOOK THE ANSWER IS YES?! Like what! I had to look it up to make sure I wasn't crazy, and yeah fetuses don't feel pain until 24-25 WEEKS. Just absolutely broke my brain that this is the reason they used to explain her not getting an abortion. My ability to suspend disbelief absolutely died at this point.
[collapse]SpoilerAlso, aliens.
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