Miss Cannon Fodder Wants To Escape Death Flags Chapter 29 Discussion

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Take this review for what it's worth, only at chapter 1 translated. So far it's really long winded. Mtl reading isn't bad if done thoughtfully and carefully.

So I MTLed to 30 and I agree with the first person's posted review. The story suffers from lack of cohesion, despite what the translator says. I'll update my review if the translation makes the story that much better. But for now, it's a rather clunky read.
 
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