yukako February 19,2025 #1 This does the plot right, can't point out any obvious flaws. MC uses weak to strong and the plot armor doesn't feel forced. All smooth I would say. Will keep you updated for any poisons! Reply
This does the plot right, can't point out any obvious flaws. MC uses weak to strong and the plot armor doesn't feel forced. All smooth I would say. Will keep you updated for any poisons!
