Try Begging Chapter -- Discussion

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okey This is not a hate but constructive criticism. I want to say if the writer want to write Torture scenes that's fine but don't tell me a psycopath, a serial killer will switch like a push-up bottom from a serial killer to a lovy dovey teddy bear it did not make sence for me at all while reading it, also it's a bad message =Bad ending. While reading it I was expecting a good revenge plot for MLby holding him accountable after all the amout of torture he did to FL. He's unredeemable he's a criminal of R*pe which is not justified if the writer wants to make some kinks and BD*M I would love to but they have to be consensual if the writer want to have the ML doing them. Please I would like to see more accourate psychological ideas for each charactere. Yes it's fiction ! But even in fiction movies they have some sence in villain characteres. The manhwa Art is beautiful That's why I'm going to give two stars. So readers now you have the idea and spoilers so you have been warned read at your own risk and enjoy.
 
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