I Don’t Want To Be the Protagonist of a Romance Novel Chapter 35 Discussion

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A 2/5 stars.

The premise was great and the characters were unique so much so that I have never seen this sort of novel premise or characters anywhere else.

But this suffers from a creative but lazy author.

There could be so much more worldbuilding going on, he could've expanded on the cities and describing them so that we get an idea of what things look like.

But he only describes the bare minimum like eye color, hair color, clothes color and unique features of the 7 characters.

Yes, really. So far, we have only focused on 7 characters. The 5 heroines, the MC and lorenzo. Thats all.

And we are seeing some progress already with the FMLs at chapter 35 which is good, but again, this feels incomplete because we havent explored the world outside the capital/palace at all. Which could have made this novel and the story so, so much better.

Overall, a 2/5. 2 stars and not 0 stars because of the premise and characters.
 
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