Villainess and the Stalker Chapter 16 Discussion

I haven't read much, so I can't really say, but I think that this story has an interesting premise. It's just that it suffers from the extreme amount of monologues. It tells far too much and shows too little.

Though it's rather interesting to see how he will become a stalker and what his background is.

Also, with his background, I feel as though his character is a bit... s*upid? I mean, the story's been hunting that he has some high status, he acts rather ordinarily?

I don't know, maybe it's just me.

So, the story is interesting, but poorly executed.