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So essentially this is kingdom builder in space it's honestly quite boring and just "worship his Majesty he did something everyone else could do isn't he so great 😃👍!!!" Over all I find myself not really liking the main character because tbh he is lame and the author is obsessed with making him taller dispite originally being small and on the young side.So when the author makes him taller not only does he fit in the story less but also his pants apparently. Like the author never mentioned anything like an appearance change or anything dispite the height difference so essentially it's just this tall baby faced punk with long hair and jeans that stop at his ankles. Honestly sounds gross which doesn't help when the ML is a lil bit*h who comments yeah it's not appealing looking. If the author made the main character look cuter it would be fine or heck even just left him how it was it would at least be a bit humourous. His brother out growing him would be funny.On the other hand I feel absolutely no suspense at all. They act like there is this threat of being invaded by a lizard tribe or something however I feel no suspense from that at all they pretty much might as well not even exist because at the countries weakest state they don't even have any setbacks... Like at all.No war, no natural disasters, no great beast invasion. Yeah they act like that could be a thing at the border but little did the author know they were being dumb the whole time! They write like it's a thing of the past so appertly the front lines could be held with like 30 wizard dudes and some guys with sticks so Spoiler
the almost 200 wizard dudes that were discarded like nothing because appertly everyone including the schools became ret*rded after the great space flood
[collapse] should absolutely decimate that whole ordeal.Over all I'm annoyed and this is dumb so meh.